Is it Winter or just you ???

Cold glares
Shuddering me
Freezing me to ice

Earlier, my bare
body would be
feeling very nice

Did summer
change itself
to winter ??

You mummer
Rejoiced yourself,
My love, u intered ...

The early cool breeze
Now turns ghastly
With the chilly storms

Your looks now freeze
A sudden change, vastly
Different from regular norms

Is it a natural change
like changes in season
or there is some other cause ?

Why is your comportment strange
Tell me the reason
Don't hesitate, don't pause...

Now the season cold
is at its peek
covering me with rime

Yet, stories are untold
Explanations i seek,
Frostiness escalating with time.....

-->Original by me
Sanket Karkare
11th August 08


Tried writing differently... [:D]