When two minds write....( A co-write)

Sanket:

Shiney and I were just having a chat
When she thought of a thought
"What would happen if there was no money fat ?"
Through which various things are bought.....

We decided to write something
On this topic weird
So, our brains were searched for thoughts
And to pen down we were geared..


Shiney:

both are tensed how two minds can combine
our gray matter is having hustle and bustle
he is awesome and m just fine!
hope our ideas won't tussle !!!

Sanket:

Some of the consequences Shiney said
Were then in the scrapbook laid....


Shiney:

"Then there won't be fight over land
smiles and laughter will be given in return
people will move with hand in hand
a new lesson next generation will learn!"

Sanket:

But how will people purchase
Anything they want, at all ??
In the past, we would have to gaze
Exchange of things...Hey.. What bout malls??


Shiney:

barter can be one choice
u take and i give is what u say
but i don't think this would be wise
let's just share without having to pay!

Sanket:

Sharing???? I don't know
I never like this concept
If both want at once, where will the thing go??
And also when no one wants, where shud the thing be kept ??


Shiney:

thats the motto dear
either divide the things into half or adjust
then there won't be lack of money fear
also, there won't be fights over second or first....

Sanket:
So, u say, u will divide Computer and Clothes
Just think of how weird it would be...
No one would follow the "sharing oaths"
it would just be "first me, first me.."

Shiney:

half of the lesson u have learnt man
division was the first one
but u lack on the adjustment lane
don't worry m here, till u r not done

Sanket:

ur words have confused me
what r u tryin to say???
A weird write this is gonna be
Coz our minds seem goin different ways...

Shiney:

put this confusion in rhyme
i will clear that one
but don't be mime
its really fun

thats the beauty of being human
we don't think alike
but can share the same pan
this can be a new invention down the pike!

Sanket:

So, some things would be shared
And some will be our own
But how will companies pay fare??
How will we know, a country has grown???

Shiney:

economy will not be the basis of growth
curves on the face will be desired aim
everyone will work and noone shall loath
and their won't be anymore blame game!

Sanket:
I think it has become too late
We got to conclude the write
Say,the system is actually great
The money thing is very right

Shiney:
if money system is to be concluded
then wts the use of this write
let others ponder on the actions that they did
who knows, there might not be anymore fights......

Sanket:
Use of this write??? U are asking
I say we created something great
It was our first poem in multitasking..
For our next poem, everyone is gonna wait..

Shiney:

oh! I have to start the lesson again
u r still lost in coins and penny
money is the biggest bane
but u r not alone.....their will be many!

Sanket:

yeah, there will be lots
who think thoughts like I
But teach the lesson now NOT
coz me sleepy so BYE...

-->original by
Shiney and Sanket
6th july 08